Friday, March 02, 2012

4AM

The phone rang at 4AM. She smirked.

"Sure, I'll come drive you home. You do know your house is closer to the bar than theirs, right? Shh, I'm just busting your balls. I know what you really want."


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22 comments:

  1. Tara R.6:06 PM

    'Smirk' is a good word to use here. Nicely done.

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  2. Carrie6:38 PM

    Bwah ha haaa...can we say booty call?

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    1. Megan7:49 PM

      I, uh, She preferred to think of it as realizing he didn't really want to spend a whole day without her. ;)

      Yeah, booty call.

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  3. Unknown9:29 PM

    Very cute! Loved reading this.

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  4. Kim at Let Me Start By Saying8:17 AM

    The smirk made me wonder whether she was gonna tell someone off or get off. Nicely answered! lol
    Came from the Trifextra linkup.

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    1. Megan1:19 PM

      Gotta love when both those things happen. :) Thanks!

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  5. Laura Ashe10:17 AM

    Very nicely done. Funny and provocative.

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  6. Amanda10:37 AM

    I like how she owns the conversation!

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    1. Megan1:20 PM

      It's not too hard to own a conversation with a drunk. ;)

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  7. booguloo12:29 PM

    Really? At 4am? smile

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    1. Megan1:22 PM

      Some people use the birds and morning paper delivery as alarm clocks, others use them as a sign it's time to sleep. :))

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  8. Amelia11:10 PM

    *LOVE*

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  9. Megan12:06 AM

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  10. Trifecta7:47 AM

    Thanks so much for linking up to Trifextra. Remember, this weekend’s entries are being judged by the Trifecta community, so make sure you visit the site at the close of the challenge to vote. Our linking service will not allow you to vote for a link from the same computer where it was submitted, so plan ahead! Voting closes 12 hours after the close of the challenge. Winners will be announced with the Monday post. Hope to see you back then.

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  11. Anonymous10:23 AM

    I love that she was right there, ready, and yet how she was the one in charge.

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    1. Megan1:21 PM

      She *might* have been waiting to gloat about how she was right, he really didn't want to go a whole day without her. :))

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  12. Fran3:52 PM

    This definitely captured my curiosity! An intriguing response to the prompt.

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  13. Sharp Little Pencil6:54 PM

    Megan, as Harry Connick sang, "With a wink and a smile"! Sweet and funny. Amy Barlow Liberatore
    http://sharplittlepencil.com/2012/03/03/the-call/

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    1. Megan9:07 PM

      Ahh, he liked Harry Connick. Perfect. :) Thanks!

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  14. karen1:49 AM

    Sweet, and so very playful. Great entry.

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